"Geblicon" is the first novel in a planned series. Book two in the series ("Altamira") is a novel in the making. I would love to get reader response from Book 1, Chapter 1 (or subsequent chapters, if you have a copy) and factor that into Book 2. This form is designed to collect your comments (pro and con) pertaining to Chapter 1 of Geblicon.

But first, your name or Userid so that I can identify the e-mail that will be sent to my by the provider's server (the e-mail will contain your responses from clicking yes or no in the check-boxes below):

My name is:

===>Perhaps you have specific questions or thoughts about Chapter 1's content?

1. For example, was the story's background clearly stated? Yes No
2. Were the characterizations strong enough? Yes No
3. Are there sections of Chapter 1 that you'd like to see further developed? Yes No
4. If you answered Yes to question 3, which areas or relationships would you like to see further developed in the series?
5. Perhaps the relationship between Harlan Sr. and Beethoven? Yes No
6. The relationship between Steve and Jennie? Yes No
7. Jennie's father and Jennie? Yes No
8. More discussion on Harlan Sr.'s war exploits? Yes No
9. More discussion on the war itself? Yes No
10. How Steve came to have an apthcat for a pet? Yes No
11. Further explanation of Beethoven's capabilities? Yes No
12. Other?